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[x_byakugan_x]

2 sonnets

Alarm

Early morning clock on the hardwood wall
taken into relentless slavery.
Abjectly crucified at twelve feet small,
Do you not know you will never be free.

Half past then and onto pastel morning,
when you shriek cries of a wounded creature. When you scream the cries of wounded creatures
Your most unapologetic feature Tear into me with a ruthless scorning
tears into my core with ruthless scorning with your unapologetic features.

bringing me up to share the metronome.
A soft crimson glow burns into my eyes
like star rising into ebony dome
burns gently into the dawn’s lonely skies.

I offer these painful words, but true
“Remember that I will always hate you”


I hate writing sonnets

I really really hate writing sonnets
All the work to get down the rhyming
Match it up with perfect metric timing
Fourteen lines capped with rhyming couplets

Heaven forbid you insert some hidden
Imagery. The countless tricks—idle chores,
Like abstract similes and metaphors.
Surely tasks like these should be forbidden

It is far too difficult to write one,
though I still appreciate the masters;
it takes all the skill of bronze-age casters,
But I would rather write something more fun.

You’ll have to forgive this sounding like shit,
I just couldn’t put my heart into it.

The lines to the side are alternate lines for that spot depending on how I want the style to work. Enjoy. I'll post some CC on other pplz' later.

[MaxDamage]

Got wood. Choking on it.

I ate a raw boat
And it gave me a sore throat.
I cough blood
As my neck is cut by splinters of torn oak;
But hey,

At least my gored corpse will float.

[MaxDamage]

Still Rockin'.

I am a still stone.
No shine, no colour.
Worn by the water -
Not picked, chucked or skimmed.
I do not float, swim or think,
Put me back in the water.
Watch me sink.

Edited by MaxDamage, 15 March 2011 - 10:40 AM.

[MaxDamage]

Untitled Summer.

Lush green grass cushioning your footfall;
Warmth come back to you like an old friend.

Rich, ripe, redbrick rows.
Blossoms.

Blades of grass;
Like lost summer lovers hair rolling fresh against your face,
Clean and green,
Wet as a kiss.
Cooling and soothing bliss, melting scars,
Lashes of grass gently stirring warm skin into silken pristine cream
As the sun adds a dash of near-forgotten dream.

An orange glow, an easy light, ambient aura of saintly halo.
The sun lets us stare, if you dare.
But blushes.
And I want to unshackle myself from this world,
To let go
To float free, far up above;
Forget everything about this stone I never loved -

And kiss her.

Edited by MaxDamage, 28 April 2011 - 08:01 AM.

[x_byakugan_x]

I was wondering where you went.

[MaxDamage]

I was wondering where you went.

Rofl.

[Starskream]

Mat cat...

The cat sat on that mat
it dideth so with poise and elegance
unlike the dog that frolicked with neglegence
this cat stood out like a gentlemen rat
furry tail not fleshy and pink
this cat does not enjoy lifes water
as life will make it sink..



Freestyle poetry bitch

[MaxDamage]

Mat cat...

Freestyle poetry bitch

Crap.
Anyone can write smart-arse mock 'rap'/poetry.

DIG DEEPER.

Edited by MaxDamage, 05 May 2011 - 09:06 AM.

[teh_metalizer]

Donno if some1 had posted it:
Homless dude recycling one of his poets:

[Starskream]

Untitled Summer.

[And kiss her.[/i]

Crap.

Anyone can pretend to be deep and put their writing in italics when they are infact as bland as a wet carrot

Mine wasnt meant to be serious kthxbai x

[MaxDamage]

Crap.

Anyone can pretend to be deep and put their writing in italics when they are infact as bland as a wet carrot

Mine wasnt meant to be serious kthxbai x

Aint pretending to be nuffink.

If I wrote srs poetry I'd be posting it somewhere other than gaming forum (ie: some of mine are published).

Difference is, I have at least some degree of ability, all you have is cheap sarcasm.
And it's been done before in here.. and better.

If you went into the photography thread and posted myspace poses of yourself of no artistic intent or quality, you'd be open/subject to the same derision.

Edited by MaxDamage, 05 May 2011 - 01:12 PM.

[Starskream]

Aint pretending to be nuffink.

If I wrote srs poetry I'd be posting it somewhere other than gaming forum (ie: some of mine are published).

Difference is, I have at least some degree of ability, all you have is cheap sarcasm.
And it's been done before in here.. and better.

If you went into the photography thread and posted myspace poses of yourself of no artistic intent or quality, you'd be open/subject to the same derision.

2 Can be a dick. S'ALL AM SAYIN NIG. Your's wasnt actually bad, see.

[MaxDamage]

2 Can be a dick. S'ALL AM SAYIN NIG. Your's wasnt actually bad, see.

Your mum's a fokken poet.

Neither was yours.
Let's fuck.

Edited by MaxDamage, 05 May 2011 - 03:16 PM.

[MaxDamage]

Sucking Fummer.

The days are too bright and the nights are too short -
There's no hiding from the light,
In which all but the buried are caught.
If I close my eyes and cover them,
If I wrap a blanket over my head,
And hide under the bed;

It wont matter.
I'll still know it's there.

Light leaks into the holes in the darkness,
There is no escaping its glare.

Sucking Fun.
Written in my head as I walked to work, against the full wrath of Sun's merciless glare.

The Damned Sun..
Cutting into my eyes,
Lacerating mucus eye hymen -
Solar skullfuck pressing relentless unto blindness.
No peace in blinking,
No release in turning away;
Scars already forming on the optical nerves that haven't yet burned away.

Fuck The Sun.
FUCK The Sun.

Pushing into my mind.
Packing into my head,
Uncaring that this void it steals
Once held my conscience, dreams and memories.

Flattened against the rear of my skull,
As if trapped in elevator three-times full.

Piercing light turns bright whites to dull greys,
Like the frazzled matter it so militantly invades.

Unable to breathe, move, speak or think;
Under heat, light and pressure:
I shrink.

Inferior (and lazy) Extension:

Against blinding pandemonium I acknowledge an emerald blur
An exit light it seems is leading to my spine.
As the last of my mind's hive cells burn to cinder;
I bid them farewell,
To starve Sun's greed of yet further tinder.

Leaping into and down the helter skelter,
I have failed to escape her grasp;
Merciless Sun chases enraged,
In no mortal's prison shall her sons of rays be caged.

My noggin to my tailbone are set brilliant afire,
As effortless energy pours in,
Glowing through skin;
Setting nerve endings alight in yellows and rocketfuel hues
Branching and waving like fluorescent trees
In lightning-cast breeze.

Until I succumb,
And am one;
Absorbed by The Sun.

[MaxDamage]

Hell Won(g)

She kills me,
She kills me not;
She kills me,
She kills me not.
Kill me.
Kill me knot.

[x_byakugan_x]

What the fuck.





What the fuck.

[MaxDamage]

What the fuck.





What the fuck.

xD

[MaxDamage]

I can't stop carressing my head.

Pushing, pulling at the tight flesh around my skull,
The full force of my palm working its way around every corner and curve.

My brain wants to get out,
My brain wants to escape.
It aches, it swells, it can't breathe.

I can feel it under there,
It's seperate from me in a way -
Another life, tragically trapped;
Barely conscious.

My hand is like a dog frantically running around and scratching at the rubble,
There's someone down there but it can't reach.
There's no way.

Edited by MaxDamage, 25 September 2011 - 11:36 AM.

[spiri7ussancti]

I can't stop carressing my head.

Pushing, pulling at the tight flesh around my skull,
The full force of my palm working its way around every corner and curve.

My brain wants to get out,
My brain wants to escape.
It aches, it swells, it can't breathe.

I can feel it under there,
It's seperate from me in a way -
Another life, tragically trapped;
Barely conscious.

My hand is like a dog frantically running around and scratching at the rubble,
There's someone down there but it can't reach.
There's no way.

riiiiiighhhhh, NOPE

[MaxDamage]

riiiiiighhhhh, NOPE

Nope what.