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[Champski]

So I figured it would be better to have a different thread for my comic so I don't clog up the gmod picture thread. I'll just post the new pages in this post and let you know when they get put up.

#1 - Between a portal and a hard face

First issue of my first ever webcomic. It starts off rather on a bad foot for our main, somewhat dimwitted hero, when all he's been through leads up to this moment. But...what has he been through exactly? Stay tuned to find out.

#2 - Memories and mischief

The story begins on it's journey to answers when Brad recalls how he gained possession of a....hey is that a Gameboy? The device may be more than just tetris and turok, however

#3 - Flat batteries

Brad is all out of luck with his new Gameboy when he discovers the bonus feature.

I was really tossing up on how to show this comic, because it's showing the turn of events that leads to the journey itself. I wasn't quite sure how I should make it happen, and under what circumstances, but I came up with this. Sorry about the lack of humour, maybe there's none at all, but I realised when I was making this page that there will be pages when there is no humour, and instead you're getting answers. It's like the comic book equivalent to Lost I suppose, except less confuzzling. This page in particular probably has the least humour because it's the beginning of a journey that sweeps you up into the....forget it, just read the page.

#4 - New in town

our new character here is actually based on one of my friends in rl, actually. A few of my characters are, and some of them I just borrowed their names, but I have to say this new character is based on a friend of mine from school. A tiny bit overdone, but mostly how he acts, looks, everything. Makes you think how crazy the whole thing's going to get. Also, I have to put up with him at school, so it's bad enough beating up Brad with him.

#5 - rebel rebel

Our men trade stories about their...clothes?

Once the story develops feel free to send in your comments and ideas as mentioned in my other post, I'll give you all credit for each page I use your ideas in.

[Kuassi]

lol....the second one is great!

[ArmoredSandwich]

So I figured it would be better to have a different thread for my comic so I don't clog up the gmod picture thread, so I'll just whack the first 2 pages back up here, and see how it goes.

#1

#2

and ill be waiting for the next page ^^

[Meng]

Groovy

i too willl be wating for next page.

[Champski]

Thanks, guys. I figured it might be pretty hard to get someone's attention towards this on the first issue, especially when what you're trying to do comes out in parts. I'm going to try to put a new page up each week.

[travisa]

Hehe, nice work, keep 'em coming.

[ScripT]

I like it alot. I would buy this if it was in a comic book store.

[Champski]

Page 3 is now up, everyone!

[Champski]

Everyone, page #4 has now been uploaded for the insane and the idiotic. It says something for your mental health that you're reading this thread in the first place. Go on, scoot, unless you're an idiot.

[Banzai_Bunny]

Wow incredibly nice work i loved number 2

[Champski]

Everyone, page 5 has now been uploaded. So good you'll want to roll in broken glass.

[Champski]

I just had a thought too, if anyone wants to know when the next page is coming out, maybe you could put yourself down here and I'll PM you on any updates on the comic and when it's coming out? Just a suggestion, but let me know if you have any ideas like that.