21 replies to this topic

[Rastapaner]

would u please take a look at the first CSS movie I made
It´s like a year old and I just started playing CS:source (like 3 or 4 month)
I mean I played it sometimes at my friends house..but not rly
(you will see, i hadn´t used fastswitch that time 4 example^^)

now i started to plan and collect some footage for my SECOND fragmovie^^
so i would be thankfull 4 everyfeedback what i could do better or what u liked

I´ll upload it 2 our clanserver, like 2morrow
ccause google had needed lice 2 days 2 upload it
and i don´t know y, but they ruined the quality!!!!
it looks like a peace of SHIT! (talked of quallity ;-) )

the soundtrack is by the band of some friends of mine
and for those who don´t understand german^^..the casting ost means in englisch "I have got a pistole. you ain´t got a pistole" and it´s from Olli Banjo, a german rapper
^^ stupid but kinda funny
or at the beginning..the voice is saying "welcome to TimoBeil"

so here it is and as i said, Im thankfull for every coment, flaming or whatever
THX folx

here it comes^^
Virtual Pixel Massacre
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=6512652788690760105

[T w i Z t i D]

You were in a pub server, you reload after 3 bullets. I watched like 30 seconds, 4/10

[Rastapaner]

plz look the whole movie..

but ur right
their are only like 2 or 3 war scenes
but that were the scenes where i bashed 3 or 4 guys

but plz say something about the music 2 n stuff

[edit]
lol btw
i reloaded cause i won the round ;-)

[CrispyDuck411]

I don't like the music.

[Rastapaner]

I like it...
but every gots a diferent taste
i thought it would be a great CSS sountrack
also i didn´t want to use any song, anyone could know
the world don´t need any linkin park css movie 4 example^^

also it´s the band of my buddys and they where in the localradiostation on n1 with that song^^

[LlNKlN]

ok man, i have made a TUN of cs videos, and to me they seem pretty leet, here are some pointers...

1 set up a lan, and have a friend spectate you playing and get cool kills.
2 get a better choice of music, somethnig that your fans know. NO TECHNO BS, unless it sandstorm jk
3 work on your editing, i noticed you where using the standard MS editing program. not everyone can afford a great editing program, rip one off, or save up and get a decent one. if you are seriouse about maknig videos..because directors notice these kinds of things.
4 leave CS game sound in, gun shots add to the video A TUN.

thats about it, msg me back when you make another video. man, keep working.

[Grebliv]

I think the music is ok, not really my type but anyways...

I'we seen a lot worse, then I mean A LOT, just lose the pub as well as those everyday frags, either have it something extraordinary or just don't put it there.

I didn't think it was to bad just try getting some more really good material and then start working on a movie.

[Dvondrake]

Wasn't the best movie I've ever seen, but it was pretty good.
The music was alright, not really my style though. (Techno FTW! Ha, LlNKlN! )
Editing was about average; nothing really special, but it did the job.
You're pretty good at CSS, but try to move around a bit more when you're getting shot at.
7/10

[Joby]

Frags are nice, music can use some fine tuning.

8/10

[-Reaver-]

Lol, you fail at frag grenades, just like me.

7/10. Needs more editing. =P

[frostassasin]

pretty good kills, but you don't seem to know how to crouch. I actually kind of liked the music.

[Giant Hippy]

it was gud but u gotta liek get better vid quality and music was gr8

[h0micide]

The movie was pretty ok, but I rly didn't like the music. Take something louder, for example some fine metalcore like Atreyu.

[Ineffable]

it was k.. music is not wat i REALLY like.. but eh
7/10

[Hazey-m::.]

To many noobs, to much spraying not enuff headshots.........


need to use deagle/awp/scout/knife/ak/m4 to get people going '' ooooh ahhh '' you only used 2 of those

[Rastapaner]

know I got it in better quallity online!
it´s not the best quality, but much better then the google link!

thank´s for the feedback!
I´ll use it at the next one
Virtual Pixel Massacre - better version

[otaku_4_life]

would u please take a look at the first CSS movie I made
It´s like a year old and I just started playing CS:source (like 3 or 4 month)
I mean I played it sometimes at my friends house..but not rly
(you will see, i hadn´t used fastswitch that time 4 example^^)

now i started to plan and collect some footage for my SECOND fragmovie^^
so i would be thankfull 4 everyfeedback what i could do better or what u liked

I´ll upload it 2 our clanserver, like 2morrow
ccause google had needed lice 2 days 2 upload it
and i don´t know y, but they ruined the quality!!!!
it looks like a peace of SHIT! (talked of quallity ;-) )

the soundtrack is by the band of some friends of mine
and for those who don´t understand german^^..the casting ost means in englisch "I have got a pistole. you ain´t got a pistole" and it´s from Olli Banjo, a german rapper
^^ stupid but kinda funny
or at the beginning..the voice is saying "welcome to TimoBeil"

so here it is and as i said, Im thankfull for every coment, flaming or whatever
THX folx

here it comes^^
Virtual Pixel Massacre
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=6512652788690760105

...the people were hardly shooting back.

[bucky100]

I think I've heard the music in other frag movies. I'm not sure. None the less, I hate it. Nice frags though.

[T w i Z t i D]

rewatching in high quality, maybe ill like it better

[T w i Z t i D]

K i rewatched it, you spray (usually upclose tho so no harm) but i hate spray, there was 3 kool kills, the triple kill, that wasnt ina pub, The one where u pulll out your flash and he turns around and u shoot him, and where the guy just looks at you and u shoot him in the face, Its a decent video, but PUb videos are starting to piss me off, spraying pisses me off, cuz i spray all the time when i dont want to,


7/10