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Virtual Pixel Massacre - the first CSS fragmovie I made by myself

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would u please take a look at the first CSS movie I made
Itīs like a year old and I just started playing CS:source (like 3 or 4 month)
I mean I played it sometimes at my friends house..but not rly
(you will see, i hadnīt used fastswitch that time 4 example^^)

now i started to plan and collect some footage for my SECOND fragmovie^^
so i would be thankfull 4 everyfeedback what i could do better or what u liked

Iīll upload it 2 our clanserver, like 2morrow
ccause google had needed lice 2 days 2 upload it
and i donīt know y, but they ruined the quality!!!!
it looks like a peace of SHIT! (talked of quallity ;-) )

the soundtrack is by the band of some friends of mine
and for those who donīt understand german^^..the casting ost means in englisch "I have got a pistole. you ainīt got a pistole" and itīs from Olli Banjo, a german rapper
^^ stupid but kinda funny
or at the beginning..the voice is saying "welcome to TimoBeil"

so here it is and as i said, Im thankfull for every coment, flaming or whatever
THX folx

here it comes^^
Virtual Pixel Massacre
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=6512652788690760105
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You were in a pub server, you reload after 3 bullets. I watched like 30 seconds, 4/10
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plz look the whole movie..

but ur right
their are only like 2 or 3 war scenes
but that were the scenes where i bashed 3 or 4 guys

but plz say something about the music 2 n stuff

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lol btw
i reloaded cause i won the round ;-)
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I don't like the music.
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I like it...
but every gots a diferent taste
i thought it would be a great CSS sountrack
also i didnīt want to use any song, anyone could know
the world donīt need any linkin park css movie 4 example^^

also itīs the band of my buddys and they where in the localradiostation on n1 with that song^^
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ok man, i have made a TUN of cs videos, and to me they seem pretty leet, here are some pointers...

1 set up a lan, and have a friend spectate you playing and get cool kills.
2 get a better choice of music, somethnig that your fans know. NO TECHNO BS, unless it sandstorm icon_razz.gif jk
3 work on your editing, i noticed you where using the standard MS editing program. not everyone can afford a great editing program, rip one off, or save up and get a decent one. if you are seriouse about maknig videos..because directors notice these kinds of things.
4 leave CS game sound in, gun shots add to the video A TUN.

thats about it, msg me back when you make another video. man, keep working.

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I think the music is ok, not really my type but anyways...

I'we seen a lot worse, then I mean A LOT, just lose the pub as well as those everyday frags, either have it something extraordinary or just don't put it there.

I didn't think it was to bad just try getting some more really good material and then start working on a movie.

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Wasn't the best movie I've ever seen, but it was pretty good.
The music was alright, not really my style though. (Techno FTW! Ha, LlNKlN! icon_lol.gif)
Editing was about average; nothing really special, but it did the job.
You're pretty good at CSS, but try to move around a bit more when you're getting shot at. icon_razz.gif
7/10

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Frags are nice, music can use some fine tuning.

8/10
QUOTE (Plasmic Fury @ Oct 30 2010, 04:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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A completely unbiased review...

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Lol, you fail at frag grenades, just like me.

7/10. Needs more editing. =P

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pretty good kills, but you don't seem to know how to crouch. I actually kind of liked the music.

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it was gud but u gotta liek get better vid quality and music was gr8 pp_smiley7.gif

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The movie was pretty ok, but I rly didn't like the music. Take something louder, for example some fine metalcore like Atreyu.

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it was k.. music is not wat i REALLY like.. but eh
7/10

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To many noobs, to much spraying not enuff headshots.........


need to use deagle/awp/scout/knife/ak/m4 to get people going '' ooooh ahhh '' you only used 2 of those
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know I got it in better quallity online!
itīs not the best quality, but much better then the google link!

thankīs for the feedback!
Iīll use it at the next one
Virtual Pixel Massacre - better version
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QUOTE (Rastapaner @ Jun 28 2006, 06:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
would u please take a look at the first CSS movie I made
Itīs like a year old and I just started playing CS:source (like 3 or 4 month)
I mean I played it sometimes at my friends house..but not rly
(you will see, i hadnīt used fastswitch that time 4 example^^)

now i started to plan and collect some footage for my SECOND fragmovie^^
so i would be thankfull 4 everyfeedback what i could do better or what u liked

Iīll upload it 2 our clanserver, like 2morrow
ccause google had needed lice 2 days 2 upload it
and i donīt know y, but they ruined the quality!!!!
it looks like a peace of SHIT! (talked of quallity ;-) )

the soundtrack is by the band of some friends of mine
and for those who donīt understand german^^..the casting ost means in englisch "I have got a pistole. you ainīt got a pistole" and itīs from Olli Banjo, a german rapper
^^ stupid but kinda funny
or at the beginning..the voice is saying "welcome to TimoBeil"

so here it is and as i said, Im thankfull for every coment, flaming or whatever
THX folx

here it comes^^
Virtual Pixel Massacre
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=6512652788690760105

...the people were hardly shooting back.

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QUOTE (Karko @ Aug 21 2011, 07:26 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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I think I've heard the music in other frag movies. I'm not sure. None the less, I hate it. Nice frags though.
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rewatching in high quality, maybe ill like it better icon_wink.gif
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K i rewatched it, you spray (usually upclose tho so no harm) but i hate spray, there was 3 kool kills, the triple kill, that wasnt ina pub, The one where u pulll out your flash and he turns around and u shoot him, and where the guy just looks at you and u shoot him in the face, Its a decent video, but PUb videos are starting to piss me off, spraying pisses me off, cuz i spray all the time when i dont want to,


7/10
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