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Fan fiction by Jeffery McLean (me)
After a long day of micro battles Teh Pwner, FPS Doug and Kyle are attacked by Script Kiddies.
How wiill our heros fair against assalents who cheat?
http://www.meowpawjects.com/FanArt/PurePwnage-H8x0r.txt
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H8x0r (Fan fiction)
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felinoid
, Mar 13 2006 01:40 AM
#1
Posted 13 March 2006 - 01:40 AM
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I know most of the cheat codes to RL
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Posted 13 March 2006 - 02:07 AM
Hitmanblack
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Hrm....Its nice cept
1. spelling? lol?
2. Dialouge is totally screwed up...this conversation would never happen, specially doug would never say that, and kyle wouldnt talk that much
Teh Pwner
People seem desprite. It's not just about being pro anymore.
It's like someone is desprite to take me out of the picture.
Doug
Now your just being paranoid.
Kyle
No. I agree. Those people this morning.
Teh Pwner
Those were n00bs
Doug
Just got past the tutorial
Kyle
Those were just to wear us down.
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Jeremy
I dunno man liek those noobs seemed liek kinda..noobified lol. Liek dey kinda were not liek...thinking bout liek fightin me but liek thinkin bout liek somefin else liek that was not bout me u no?
Doug
Those noobs were just afraid of the HEADSHOT
Jeremy
Lawl, but no liek raelly it was kina liek dey were desparate to liek pwn me or somefin
Kyle
Yea you guys totally "pwned" them, that was some "uber micro" guys *sounds kinda like a dad trying to be gangsta*
Doug + Jeremy
Lawl
jeremy
lawl kyle just liek no, we didnt evan liek use our fucking micro skillz cause liek dous noobs seemed liek kinda liek tryin to liek ....noobify our micro n stuff
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something like that, but nice try
1. spelling? lol?
2. Dialouge is totally screwed up...this conversation would never happen, specially doug would never say that, and kyle wouldnt talk that much
Teh Pwner
People seem desprite. It's not just about being pro anymore.
It's like someone is desprite to take me out of the picture.
Doug
Now your just being paranoid.
Kyle
No. I agree. Those people this morning.
Teh Pwner
Those were n00bs
Doug
Just got past the tutorial
Kyle
Those were just to wear us down.
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Jeremy
I dunno man liek those noobs seemed liek kinda..noobified lol. Liek dey kinda were not liek...thinking bout liek fightin me but liek thinkin bout liek somefin else liek that was not bout me u no?
Doug
Those noobs were just afraid of the HEADSHOT
Jeremy
Lawl, but no liek raelly it was kina liek dey were desparate to liek pwn me or somefin
Kyle
Yea you guys totally "pwned" them, that was some "uber micro" guys *sounds kinda like a dad trying to be gangsta*
Doug + Jeremy
Lawl
jeremy
lawl kyle just liek no, we didnt evan liek use our fucking micro skillz cause liek dous noobs seemed liek kinda liek tryin to liek ....noobify our micro n stuff
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something like that, but nice try
#3
Posted 13 March 2006 - 07:18 AM
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QUOTE (Hitmanblack @ Mar 13 2006, 03:07 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hrm....Its nice cept
1. spelling? lol?
2. Dialouge is totally screwed up...this conversation would never happen, specially doug would never say that, and kyle wouldnt talk that much
Teh Pwner
People seem desprite. It's not just about being pro anymore.
It's like someone is desprite to take me out of the picture.
Doug
Now your just being paranoid.
Kyle
No. I agree. Those people this morning.
Teh Pwner
Those were n00bs
Doug
Just got past the tutorial
Kyle
Those were just to wear us down.
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Jeremy
I dunno man liek those noobs seemed liek kinda..noobified lol. Liek dey kinda were not liek...thinking bout liek fightin me but liek thinkin bout liek somefin else liek that was not bout me u no?
Doug
Those noobs were just afraid of the HEADSHOT
Jeremy
Lawl, but no liek raelly it was kina liek dey were desparate to liek pwn me or somefin
Kyle
Yea you guys totally "pwned" them, that was some "uber micro" guys *sounds kinda like a dad trying to be gangsta*
Doug + Jeremy
Lawl
jeremy
lawl kyle just liek no, we didnt evan liek use our fucking micro skillz cause liek dous noobs seemed liek kinda liek tryin to liek ....noobify our micro n stuff
---------------------------------------------------------
something like that, but nice try
1. spelling? lol?
2. Dialouge is totally screwed up...this conversation would never happen, specially doug would never say that, and kyle wouldnt talk that much
Teh Pwner
People seem desprite. It's not just about being pro anymore.
It's like someone is desprite to take me out of the picture.
Doug
Now your just being paranoid.
Kyle
No. I agree. Those people this morning.
Teh Pwner
Those were n00bs
Doug
Just got past the tutorial
Kyle
Those were just to wear us down.
-------------------------------------------------------------
Jeremy
I dunno man liek those noobs seemed liek kinda..noobified lol. Liek dey kinda were not liek...thinking bout liek fightin me but liek thinkin bout liek somefin else liek that was not bout me u no?
Doug
Those noobs were just afraid of the HEADSHOT
Jeremy
Lawl, but no liek raelly it was kina liek dey were desparate to liek pwn me or somefin
Kyle
Yea you guys totally "pwned" them, that was some "uber micro" guys *sounds kinda like a dad trying to be gangsta*
Doug + Jeremy
Lawl
jeremy
lawl kyle just liek no, we didnt evan liek use our fucking micro skillz cause liek dous noobs seemed liek kinda liek tryin to liek ....noobify our micro n stuff
---------------------------------------------------------
something like that, but nice try
You say his spelling is bad but have you looked at yours?
#4
Posted 13 March 2006 - 08:32 AM
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No, He is right my spelling is bad
Besides 95% of posting fan fiction is to get back comments.
Believe it or not fiction needs to be at a greater quality than the typical post so I don't think any spelling errors on his part really matter as much as spelling errors on my part.
Edit:
I just read his comment more closely,
I don't think those were spelling errors.
He's putting the pro gammers in context by having them use more 1337 speak while I had them using more plain english
Besides 95% of posting fan fiction is to get back comments.
Believe it or not fiction needs to be at a greater quality than the typical post so I don't think any spelling errors on his part really matter as much as spelling errors on my part.
Edit:
I just read his comment more closely,
I don't think those were spelling errors.
He's putting the pro gammers in context by having them use more 1337 speak while I had them using more plain english
I know most of the cheat codes to RL
#5
Posted 13 March 2006 - 10:04 AM
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Bravo, a person that actually thinks before he posts :-D, but yea I dont really think of spelling as a huge issue, and yea its pro context, btw have u seen all the episodes?
#6
Posted 13 March 2006 - 10:07 AM
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Nice one 
*saves as g0dz.txt*
*saves as g0dz.txt*
#7
Posted 13 March 2006 - 10:47 AM
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QUOTE (Hitmanblack @ Mar 13 2006, 07:04 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
btw have u seen all the episodes?
Up to Epp 9
I live too far away to catch Epp 10.
I know most of the cheat codes to RL
#8
Posted 13 March 2006 - 11:25 AM
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IT HAS HAPPEND!!
THE VERY FIRST PURE PWNAGE FANFIC!!!
Just thought I'd let you guys know, fanfics are an important part of any series with an online forum. I acutally have no idea is this is a good thing or a bad thing. I'll just compare this to the Megatokyo community as I generally do: Lots of fanfics tend to be kinda...ghey... They take the stuff far beyond the true series and what could be a possible plot twists. I dont like it when that happens really... The characters tend to go...out of character, out side of their normal behavior.
As for the fanfic itself: very nice, very creative. You deserve a compliment by Kyle himself
The name "Cyber boy" and "Cyber girl" kinda made me chuckle, you know why.
I found your interpretation of script kiddies, g0dz and pro grammers to be very craetive, I could see this as a part of the series to a certain extent
What I didn't like is how Kyle gets like a cybernetic eye-camera. It's a really personal thing with me liking to keep things as they are though.
I didn't understand why the cyber-d00dz didn't just go up to the crew and give them the advice and the stuff. I understand it would be highly anticlimatic and pointless just to let it happen that way, but I don't really see a reason why not. I'll just consider this a plot hole
I had no idea what was going on here really...:
Elimate who? why?
Once again I enjoyed it, good work.
THE VERY FIRST PURE PWNAGE FANFIC!!!
Just thought I'd let you guys know, fanfics are an important part of any series with an online forum. I acutally have no idea is this is a good thing or a bad thing. I'll just compare this to the Megatokyo community as I generally do: Lots of fanfics tend to be kinda...ghey... They take the stuff far beyond the true series and what could be a possible plot twists. I dont like it when that happens really... The characters tend to go...out of character, out side of their normal behavior.
As for the fanfic itself: very nice, very creative. You deserve a compliment by Kyle himself
The name "Cyber boy" and "Cyber girl" kinda made me chuckle, you know why.
I found your interpretation of script kiddies, g0dz and pro grammers to be very craetive, I could see this as a part of the series to a certain extent
What I didn't like is how Kyle gets like a cybernetic eye-camera. It's a really personal thing with me liking to keep things as they are though.
I didn't understand why the cyber-d00dz didn't just go up to the crew and give them the advice and the stuff. I understand it would be highly anticlimatic and pointless just to let it happen that way, but I don't really see a reason why not. I'll just consider this a plot hole
I had no idea what was going on here really...:
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Teh Pwner
Doug? But what about me?
Cyber Boy
Elinate each one by one untill the fps doug is all alone.
Cyber girl
We can not permit that.
Teh Pwner
Cann't you take care of it yourselfs?
Doug? But what about me?
Cyber Boy
Elinate each one by one untill the fps doug is all alone.
Cyber girl
We can not permit that.
Teh Pwner
Cann't you take care of it yourselfs?
Elimate who? why?
Once again I enjoyed it, good work.
QUOTE (Weiman @ Apr 5 2009, 01:09 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is exactly what has been going on through the entire thread, and it's not the first time either.
You come to us for advice..you just spell out what you want to get, and then ask us if it is okay, and we have to explain why it isn't. That's the world upside down.. If you would just say 'hey guys, I have an X amount of money, what should I buy?' Then this would be over in 2-3 posts, not 2-3 pages.
You come to us for advice..you just spell out what you want to get, and then ask us if it is okay, and we have to explain why it isn't. That's the world upside down.. If you would just say 'hey guys, I have an X amount of money, what should I buy?' Then this would be over in 2-3 posts, not 2-3 pages.
QUOTE (Kazzerax @ May 21 2009, 09:01 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Every time someone goes against Weiman's sig I feel like they should be bludgeoned for a few minutes in the head to feel the headache I feel when I realize someone really IS that dense.
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Posted 13 March 2006 - 08:56 PM
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QUOTE (Weiman @ Mar 13 2006, 08:25 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I had no idea what was going on here really...:
This is why feedback is good. You don't get what is going on becouse I did a bad job writing the story.
I might do a folow up. In it the new camra will be eliminated.
I know most of the cheat codes to RL
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